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i have some fairly fatal flaws,
i try my best to give all of myself but still hold back.
i just want to kiss but rarely make the first move.
i want to be loved, wholly and souly for all that i am, including my insecurities.
i want to talk slower, and have what i say make sense in my head,

i want candles, i want hands on me, and notes.
i want to understand what makes me so i can impart that knowledge to you,
i want you to get inside so you can impart some knowledge back to me.

i want to feel comfortable somewhere, anywhere.
i want my fears to go away,
i want to open myself up to everything you have to offer, and i want you to offer it.
i want to be able to sleep through the night, sometimes in your bed, sometimes in your head.

i want to have the answers to my questions, and be able to give you the 19th century romance you want.
...1.26am random thoughts
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rosefoetus Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
Identify with, "i want to talk slower, and have what i say make sense in my head". Your poetry makes me miss love.
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morbidXfox Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010
I love that you decided to let your 1.26a thoughts be shared with us all, because they are rather magnificent.
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crystlcarousel Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
Why can't everyone be so open about what they want? Be able to put it into simple terms like that? It would make things so much easier in life rather than having to guess from conflicting words and actions.
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Dezziree Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010  Professional Photographer
Gosh how I wish I were this honest when it matters most!!
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rachelmia Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
and what are the pictures but visuals of the words/thoughts? ;P i think i like the whole package as it is. :P
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scottjamesprebble Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
That's very true. You're very wise young lady.

:D
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somethingstrung Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
Thanks for sharing mate, I think you've put to words what people hide, even if we don't all want exactly the same things the world would be a much easier place to understand each other if people maintained this level of raw honesty. Deep down everyone wants to be loved and we feel alone when we have no one, but when we're surrounded by people we often insist on shutting people out and being alone, and only let others love their mask. The only way to truly feel loved is to let people see what is truth; what is capable of being loved.
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scottjamesprebble Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
It's a lot easier said than done I guess.
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rachelmia Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
still undecided, whether its your words or pictures i like most.
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scottjamesprebble Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
Photography, it's got to be the photography, my words are crap, just thoughts really.
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saturnword Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Most poetry are just thoughts. Wording is a little off in places, but I still find it to be good.
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lcnavac Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010
I'm a 19th Century too!!
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xangeldust123 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
This is so beautiful. Many days I feel this way.
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kosha21 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
i think its beautiful... :)
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scottjamesprebble Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
thank you
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kosha21 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010
ur welcome :)
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megsmad Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
i like that you're so honest about yourself

:heart: faved
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scottjamesprebble Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
If I only I could be this honest to the people I care about the most.
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:iconmegsmad:
megsmad Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
there is a simple answer to this.

tell them.
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artistsmuse Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2010
GREAT advice. :)
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:iconmegsmad:
megsmad Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2010
thank you! :)
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panther372040 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
sometimes reaqlly do make the most snese, don't they? I agree with most of them but I suck royally with matters of the heart, four years since my last actual relationship! The only thing I can say is follow your heart, you give us, your audience everythign you have to offer and I do hope that we give it back.
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hater12 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
Isnt this something everyone wants at one point or another? You convey my feelings better than I can most of the time. ^^
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balgroggy Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
they reflect my own too...
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RachelLynn89 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
*sigh* Me too.
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amber-rayin Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
seriously... it sounds terribly presumptuous, but often you say what i mean...

& early morning thoughts are good, especially if you can translate them into words
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scottjamesprebble Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
Often I can't but that day it happened. :)
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:iconamber-rayin:
amber-rayin Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
then there is some mercy to be had it seems...
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scottjamesprebble Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
so it would seem.
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makiley Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Love , love <3
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Void-Hamlet-Herself Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hells, I'd love some notes on me, too. :tea:
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